i like the way sands was a story about someones actions....the whole advice at the end was a good top off to the whole scene..
"so when ryan was just 2 months the start of his life..
i got sicker than ever..and eventually just died..."-terrific..

.lyricalli was good too i liked this saying

"So we change.. Most of our decisions induced by opinions of our peers
High School Locker rooms flooded with emotions.. The halls become dominions of our tears.."

my favorite..

but my vote goes to sand i really felt his..

Vote=Sand