^^definetly feelin it inspire,nicely written good vocab,and a good story...liked the hook...the fork in the road line was nice,youll never comphrehend,very nicely written inspire...i liked th esecond verse more,,the first..seemed a bit out,dunno why,amybe the rhyme scheme was different or soethign small i couldnt pick uptrills right..second verse deeper,first complex...mix em both so you have complex deepness...ill..

nicely written i liked it...

bismillah