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IP:
I know who you be, Armageddon aka the kid who taught me how to do this shit when i first came to RB! Wassup man, long time no see, this is Camarac as i was called back then, i see not a lots changed with you. .
this was quite good, not the best effort ive seen from you, the concepts been done a lot of times but i enjoyed your take on it, had some nice internal and external rhyming, pretty good pattern, it worked well with your style, flow was flawless throughout the verse, wordplay could of been better but im sure you know that already...ha ha... ive always felt you should try something with an emotional tip or that you should get deeply imageric, that would really enhance your style cause its rather vivid now, anyways, im just tryna pick flaws here, saying "ahhh, this was dope!" dosent help you in the slightest ...lol... anyways, not a bad drop, but you can do better, i know it and you know it, peep my piece 'Mega lemme know how ive improved since i was a newbie-fuck here!
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