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Old 05-29-03, 03:34 PM   #20
HellRaizor
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Your verse will be idiocy,it’ll make me literally spill-my-drink, you couldnt come half as ill as me, if you “Split” the Ebola virus with persistancy//


all your plastic-shit is fake like tha Breasts of topless exotic-dancin-chicks //
and when u finally masterd-this I'll smoke u while rippin your Longs apart like Toxic-cancer-sticks/

im not votin cause it would be crew votes spittin you wanted feedback here it is, aight your drop was very nice but theres only so much you can say to a femcee you nahmean? like those boob punches and stripper jokes can only take you so far im not sayin you shouldnt use them but what i am sayin is dont use so much of them, try and talk about different things like how soft her rhymes were or what you really think about her and you should go very far with that combination -1-