this was very nice, I was feeling it, kinda reminds me of a relationship I had. anyway, this had some great lines, more original than most people's love pieces, and it had hook. I miss hooks, they used to be in every piece, and now maybe 1 in 5 pieces have them. AND the hook fit the piece perfectly.
this kind of reminded me of one of those punk songs about love...take that as a complement, I love punk.
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Peace

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