this is my verse off a song me and 4 of my friends are doing, i dont have their verses right now so i cant post them. im rapping about someone who lost him self, the other guys are rapping about, a cheating girl, a suicaidal kid, the streets, and war in the world. we are going to the studio this weekend to record it.

[hook 2x]
you cant see tears when your standing in a rain storm/
most hearts get torn apart coming where we came from/


the lost idenity cant tell its freinds from the enemys/
this mask is gradually stabbing but he cant set it free/
he used to be supreme king of the fuckin streets/
until he got inpeached now he stand still in defeat/
he seems to sooth him self in shallow streams of self pitty/
when he used to be the on coming up with something witty/
will he ever come out of obscurity or is his life deseased/
now antisocial it seems his friends never heard him speak/
he seeks society but it always seems so far away/
sitting alone playing if i should die tonight by marvin gaye/
one day he told me he wants to make a change/
he tried to break the mask but it was stuck in place/
he used to be ahead of the game like he was running a race/
replaced making laughs now the devils his only faith/
fuck it the bottled joy has now gone to waste/
all that remains is an empty shell and a hallow face/

[hook 2x]
you cant see tears when your standing in a rain storm/
most hearts get torn apart coming where we came from/

dont sleep on this!!!!!!!