Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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Well...? What am I supposed to say? I know how you feel about me and all, but these internet relationships never work out. Trust me, I have imaginary internet relationships with every girl online. (But maybe they don't work out because they're on the internet so much as they are imaginary... huh...)
But seriously, this was a great peice. I mean, the flow was admitivly a bit choppy. But it was still enjoyable to read. The feelings when it starts actually makes the reader feel good. But it sort of twists out of that at the end you that "Let's just be friends" line is spouted. And that never really feels good.
~Shalom~
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