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Presently Light...Waits
From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see |
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nyce post playboy, nice job for tha first time, good story.......as always things like wordplay and rhyme scheme could have been betta, but practice helps that ish out, good luck, peace, 1 luv
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