dawg, ur lyrics are whack, ur bars are to short ur wordplay n vocab is elimentery,,,,, u got flow tho...... i think that where ur goin wrong g, u see u got in places 3 word bars........ n thats just cus it flowed, iight a flow dont make shit,,,,, emotions,,,,,, aggresion,,,,,,, wordplay,,,,,,,, elivatin,,,, vocab,,,, all of dis shit makes decent lyrics,,, try n remember that...... why not write a lyric thats important to ya or somin make yo lines full,,, dont worry bout the flow so muchh respect for tryin huh keep spittin