you cant see tears when your standing in a rain storm/

that's very much like a slug line from God Love Ugly "nobody sees tears when you're standing in the storm". I was actually gonna write piece based on that line. GET OUT OF MY HEAD FLU! GET OUT!!!!!

anyways, this was cool. it had some decent wordplay and still told the story straight without being too abstract.
fun for the whole family, and by the whole family I mean me.
Peace

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