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i think that it's really good with multi's......i think it's too short though....at times the wording would mess up the flow i was getting from it....some lines didn't make too much sense like...
"it ain't my responsibility to keep you fly'n right, so if you try'n buy everything I'm sayin', I'm say'n I ain't accountable.//"
when u say i'm sayin i'm sayin and if u say you aren't responsible then why do u need to say you aren't accountable?
i think it wasn't as solid as it could be if you took more time to write it..but it was def above average....like a 6/10
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