Yo..
check this shit

yo, i lyrically spit clips while im up in the cypher
yo pass me the weed, dont bother with the lighter
cause when i'm spittin.... i spit fire.
im your simplist desire embodied in words
kid above me spittin shit that seems so absurd
watch as my verbs bullets curves and swerves seekin out his nerves.
yer all wonderin how a kid from the 'burbs
with lyrics only, verbals lonely, could have your intentions curbed
thats the power of the learned
when my face stern, kids discern, they parents concerned
that ima have the whole world "upside-down-turned"
buryin bodies in forests of fern
bring my tongue with me to get the body to burn
cause like i said earlier, my words are a flame-inducing germ

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