Not a bad drop man, and i know its a bitch being slept on, so i'll up this for you. .


I didnt think thius verse was THAT bad, you have the basics down, multi's / a bit of wordplay, flowed pretty smooth throughout, kept the bars short and tight, you could probably bebefit from adding some internal rhyming or adding more emotion and imagery into your pieces rather than a cryptioc written, that would take you ontop the next level, elevation is the key - not a bad drop though, you'll get better with practice.

Peace!