Yo this is my first rap so i dont expect alot of compliments but if you could drop some advice that would be hot.

Yo its tough when your life has been rough/
and you try to drain your problems by drinking cans of duff/
so you go out drunk and find yourself on your knees in cuffs/
and your wishing you didnt down all those pills and stuff/
so you make a note that this is enough this isnt a bluff/
and as your lying on the cold cell floor you finaly admited your not that tough/

......im not even sure i like it...