ya got a nice flow with this. ya vocab wasnt bad the whole thing was simple but nice all the same. i hear what you saying topic wise but its just like if you stop rappin bout people hating and write something original then you probably will get the credit you deserve ya nah i mean? still the piece was nice but you just gotta expand your topic and vocab etc. ANYWAY RETURN THE FAVOUR AND CHECK MINE SHINOBI MUSINGS aight peace