over all i liked it--good story--great content--can teel ya put effort inta the rhyme scheme--i have ta say I thought it ended a little weak---?is it still to be continued....
but what the fuck do i know--I'm just a newbie cloggin up the board----

would like to hear it to the audio---

appreciate any honest words ta my posts

Mystical Minstrel

&

Just anotha Madman....

peace