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Here's a REAL reply...
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VOTE=SI
SI...this was nice...nothing really WOW about this verse...I'll commend you on having some kind of noticeable FLOW, know what I'm sayin'???...like I said, the "Dope Drop" was the eye catching line because it was the most unique line in the whole verse..I mean, it could've been used before...because alot of "dope" punches have been used constantly from waaayy back...but to what I recall, I haven't seen the Dope Drop = Shakedown one as of yet..so props on this verse...I can see your on your way to making nice metaphors..
CARSON...wtf@your name...lol...*shakes head*...whatever floats your boat..hmm..
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Heat to intense...ur lines lackin heat protection
creep like a snake
emcee-license//
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I don't know..these lines kinda killed it for me...they seem to sound too basic...I know how you tried to approach it...but these lines made it seem too basic for my likes..
especially this one
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Spat so hard at u, got yelled at by mom's..."till sum one loses a mother fukin eye!"..//
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SI was alot more "Straight to the Point", although ONE or TWO of his lines are played..
Keep on working on it...BOTH of y'all..
PEACE
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