your flow is pretty good on this, but isnt fully on point... i may be wrong cause its a little hard to hear your vocals over the beat. their quite and arent fully EQ'd to come through on its own.. but the flow is pretty catchy.. your voice i koo but you need more emotion cause its boring if you dont make it seem more like you really mean what you say...

keep it up.. i can see you doin suhin...

the hook in the beat is tight.. so is the beat..


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