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Old 06-02-03, 12:32 PM   #13
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this was a tight drop.....alot of repetition and it was kinda hard to read all the way till the end...and i didn't find a line that really really stood out to me...my favorite line would be:

i feel like i am starting to forget
everything we did everything you said
i'm sorry for hurting you i'm sorry for what i did

i'd say 6/10 overrall nice drop





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