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Old 06-02-03, 02:04 PM   #13
Lyrically InSane
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betta punches, such as this one right here i was kinda feelin=Ya verse wouldn't be ILL if it was a backward free-post //
Ya spit so wack ya INTERNET ACCESS has been cut off by ya I.S.P.-host //
Force my FIST past ya tonsils and out the other end..with CLOUT-I-BLAST //
Make ya BITE THE BULLET 'til there's PUNCHES coming-out-ya-ass //


wordplay could have been betta but overall i had to go with weapons for atleast tryin

and ghost u had a few punches but half ya rymes was lackin off and barley rhymin b ut overall i tink u could have done betta