i think the first verse was completly garbage.....(honest feedback)..i think you could have put more time into it.....the title went with the first verse i thought, but then when you got more towards the bottom u started talking about textcee's and all that good stuff and u had one line about someone in your town....it was too short i think for a topical.....the second verse was much better then the first but this line:

just wait till i diss all of your on my first audio here in rb, attack these kids like they expired like a bag of old whyse chips/
everyday on this town there was a kid gettin beat by athem whips//

that was really plain and just gay.....it coulda been without that i think...i'd give this a 3/10 i think u should work on it a little more