this one is short and simple but has a good concept......try to like be more descriptive and make ur lines more longer and u would see how it helps in ur writing.....the flow was alright..just a bit off at some in-between lines but it was nice .. vocabs can work on it...over all i liked it


hopin to read more from u!

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