Flow- Weren't Consistant...Try To Make Each Line A Similar Amount Of Sylables...It Will Sound And Flow Better......

Punches- Not Hard Enough...Be More Creative And Personal...Look At Their Profile If You Have To...And Make Sure They Direct And Make Sense......

Wordplay- Didn't See Any...Its Not The Easiest Of Things To Get Grasp Of But Read Quo's Guide On It...It Will Help Alot...Read Rises Guide And Vendetta's Guide, They Will Help You Elevate Alot...

I Aint Got Enough Time To Go Through Everything But Read The Battling Guides......

Good Luck......