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IP:
Protected like a knightâs armour,
But pain penetrates due to karma,
i think this was the worst line in this piece...
Takes all positions over throwing oppositions
n takes location of the whole station,
Does countless acts of generosity without curiosity
Or robbery but still faces eternal damnation
this was the best lines i thought...
i'd rate this an 7.5/10 not an 8 only because the second verse showed u weren't too consistant wit this whole piece...the first verse i'd say is an easy 8- 8.5..............the chorus i think should been a little diffrent i thought this one was kinda corny
this was an alright drop def not the greatest though....
artifacts has spoken
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