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Old 06-03-03, 11:34 AM   #11
artifacts
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Protected like a knight’s armour,
But pain penetrates due to karma,

i think this was the worst line in this piece...

Takes all positions over throwing oppositions
n takes location of the whole station,
Does countless acts of generosity without curiosity
Or robbery but still faces eternal damnation

this was the best lines i thought...

i'd rate this an 7.5/10 not an 8 only because the second verse showed u weren't too consistant wit this whole piece...the first verse i'd say is an easy 8- 8.5..............the chorus i think should been a little diffrent i thought this one was kinda corny

this was an alright drop def not the greatest though....




















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