I think Shadow God got this one even though he capitalized all his punches... A pretty good battle here, both of your raps were laid out a lil weird with some senetences not making any sense whatsoever, but Shadow God one:
get soned, like i switched hits to ur backside, made light ur dark-hide//
its like apartheid, cuz ur dark ass and I are NOT TIED!!//
^^1-n-GONE's best line^^
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Originally posted by Shadow God
[..::||~LET THE ONSLAUGHT BEGIN~||::..]
1-N-GONE ain't a 'soldier', when someone 'yells take cover', this bitch GRABS~THE~BLANKET..
^^best line of the battle^^
I'm 'PEEIN~ON~LOSERS' cuz ya 'rhymes are str8 shit', like FECES~ON~RULERS~!..
My lyrical PIECES~ARE~BRUISERS, only way 'he'll get a vote' is if he 'INCREASES~HIS~USERS'~!.. (Multiple accounts.)
Digest that, Punk.
G H O S T. [/B]
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The only problem was he went over the same topics over and over (Talks about killing ur structure 4 lines str8 and erasing ur image) OTher than that a good battle