lol.. you suck, your friends pro'lly just don't want to tell you 'cause you're one of those tempremental types who'd pro'lly go home and cry if you heard the truth.. serious, give it up or atleast realize you need to elevate.. that was the most elementary rhyme I've read in a while.. my boy b-red just started writing like a month ago and his first rhyme ever was better than that...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=39340
^ see for yourself...
just thought I'd say something