yo vortex know's the score and i'm sorry i missed the deadline
But let's give him sum feedback on the vers
Quote:
Life on the street is hard,
he'd love getting a Penny for his Thoughts
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I thought tha beggining of the verse was a great opener
And the verse was tight, it was true, had wordplay, was creative
and had a good story, the structure was solid and tidy
great stuff, i always enjoy your topical pieces
-peace-