It's dropping to the bottom and I can't let that happen!

You already know that I liked this one but I could probably tell you more about why, I guess. I always like the way you write. You describe everything really well and use good words in your pieces.

"Though hard to believe, he made me feel wanted and secure
He opened up my eyes when I was blinded by fear and hatred
He freed my soul when it was bounded by insecurities and hurt
He cleared my mind when it was blurred by thoughts of insults and bruised by reckless hearts
But most of all He gave me myself, a person with a new perspective and a new outlook in life
But like all wonderful and good things, must come to an end "

I liked that part. You told how much he meant to you, how he changed you, and what he did. You wrote all that really good.

"Sadly he came to an abrupt end
His coldness towards me gave me chills up my spine
His harsh demeanor took me aback
And the warmth that I felt before was now replaced by hushed silence
Your loving smile now turned to an unwavering stare
People change for a special reason but I see not the reason behind this
Each and everyday that passes by I try to suppress this surreal feeling with in me
Though I long for those happy days when we talked freely without obligation
Laughed openly and those long talks about life in general
I feel so shattered, pieces of me thrown about and scattered everywhere "

Since you wrote all the good stuff that he did, then went to that part, I kinda felt bad. It looks like you put a lot of heart into this and I felt it. I was in a situation sorta like this so that's also why I felt it.

"But shattered I am my will and spirit are not
I will try to make an effort to go on though unsure of what life brings, whether he will still be a part of it
But nevertheless I will go on and the pieces that he lay shattered on the ground will find its place once again
Though he left me shattered, you made me whole in the process and I am grateful for it
Shattered he left me, and whole he will find me"

I really liked the ending of it. You told how much the guy did for you, then switched his attitude and it broke you, then you tell how you're going to pick yourself up and keep going. Niiiiiiiice job.