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Old 06-04-03, 04:23 PM   #10
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Horus outshone on this, nice flow, vocab was straight, finisher coulda been worded better in my opinion but it was an above average verse, could really of been made longer to make it a better collab, possibly with a hook or something.
Saph's verse wasnt too good, flow was always off point to me, she seemed to be more on the poetic tip that anything else, her bars were stretched and thats what ruined her flow, but other than that, nice content, bring her over to here man, or drop me the sites URL through PM and i'll bring some over. .

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