Not a bad piece my man, flow was cool, seemed nicely presented, topic could of been done better if taken more time to perfect it, multi's and internal rhyming would of helped step it up a level too, wordplay was nice throughout, i liked a couple of the disses towards RB members, the Spitting Quik one was ok, possibly could of been re-worded to be made better but this wasnt a bad effort at all, you'll get btter with time, thats all it is is practice - keep at it, and develop it, you have most of the basics down.

Peace!