Nice drop Wooshy, i saw verse one when it was up first time round and this has turned out better than id expected, second verse was easily the best of the two to me, chorus was a pretty dope touch as well, would be beter in audio but i'll leave that one up to you. Again, a few more multi's / internals would be better, possibly some wordplay added in it would spice it up, oh, and try to get your lines so there an even number of syllables in length, that goes a huge way into developing the flow is the syllables each verse, count them out, i usually go for between 13-16 a line.
Just some advice from a vet there, but you'll learn that with time.

Elevation is the key man, keep at it, you can only get better.

Peace!