this piece was aight.......bit ambigious though throught....lol im stupid aight and slow but at the start it sounded like you were on about miscarraiges..then finished talkin about some kinda fight wen fools use guns...you kinda lost me a bit...and i aint sure the title fits in....although must give props for these lines

In the eyes of the beholder you must fight through the disguise
Through the lies and the distractions calling you from the skies
Because the size of the prize is much more then meets the eyes
There are no second tries this is chance a do or die

ireally liked those lines....keep spittin..thats the only way youll get better