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Old 06-04-03, 09:21 PM   #17
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we both stayed last at work that night...floodgates of attraction smothering each other
on the large wooden desk....we evolved from friend into lover

^Great line for an overall great verse. I liked it from start to finish. A great twist on the ending. But maybe he should have killed her. Just a suggestion.

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