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Old 06-05-03, 12:23 AM   #5
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yo i jus wanna take tha time to thank every1 who replied to my poem, id bet ud be surprised to find it was a keystyle, but none tha less what i was feelin it...props especially to shiznit for tha breakdown on it. i like to see what other poets see from my work cuz i write it open endedly. it can b used as a metaphor for almost nething u love an has gone. i was writtin it as if tha gurl i loved had died an these questions where being possed to god himself for taking her away, thats y at the end i was like im on my way and tha path was lit w/ stars cuz she was at heaven an i was gonna kill myself but only hope that god wouldnt put me in hell for committin suicide...thx again all...1
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