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aight ill break this down, youngblood first..
You had a fucking killer flow going with you man, great...
"thiz iz my final-testto snap your spine-and-chest
wit wordz rougher than primal-flesh/twist your chest"
thats a real real good opener, nice short, and to the point, which is important in an opener...
"these
rhymez-be-blessed...by this flame throwing
equipped kind/giving me the ability to crisp-mines
crush you then rippp this kid six hundred and sixty
six-times/well grippen' sick linez...only replying, on
stabbin' your mind with your nose-bone/which leaves
your flowz-blown"
this shit was nice, not too strong punches, but again, the flow was spot on, could improve on punches though, in a battle its important in battles.....
"thats why your
jawz-stripped/cause i rip faces
with jaws-grip/bitch applause-this/lyrical lock-smith/
thats noxious...with the rawest rage-flow/containing
enough flame painting/to make this whole fucking
page-glow/YO!!!!!"
aight, you could really leave the "YO" at the end out, kinda makes the reader go "ehhh go home kid." ya know.. but a mean again, that is a killer ending, AGAIN, flow spot on, and the wordplay was very sweet....
now to hand..
"like a witch im spellin blood n cursin u wid a "HEX",i accepted last time but u stalled n said ud battle me "NEXT"//
ill beat u eather way pic up a mic n well do auido instead of "TEXT",all emcees are lower on the food chain like dinasours u can call me tha "REX"//"
was an alright opener, bit poor on the punch & flow scene, and was pretty long for an opener...
"if u gotta gun "Cock-It",why take time ta spit when u got ur pre-writins wid u in ur "Pocket"//
sorry ta say but this kid couldnt hold my life around his neck if my picture was in his "Locket"//"
your lines are nice and even here, which kind of helps the flow, but the second line took too long to get to the point, cud of done with a few more rhymes in the middle or something...
"wid a gallon of "gas n a match" u couldnt spit "Hot",like a Blind sniper amin at me u still couldnt hit "tha-Spot"//
it was a mistake "Messin-wid-ME",ta lose in this battle is youngs "Destiny"//
u see me comin u better be "Packin-tha-Heat",like ice man ill freeze u,n were u around my neck as ICE like "MISTER-T"//"
right first two lines were tight, i liked them a low, last one again took pretty long to get to the point, but not bad ending....
this is hard one for me, Hand had the punches on his advantage, but young had a tight tight tight flow with him...
going on other peoples likes, id say hand one as he had the punches which tend to count more, but going with my opinion ima say young gets this one, his flow was soo sweet and thats what i like in a verse....
vote: youngblood
peace
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