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Old 06-05-03, 11:16 AM   #5
metaphysical one
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alright, Bribe's verse was pretty tight, except for those first two lines. THOG, your verse was alright but it was too sporadic and the flow was a little off . ..

"THOG swingin fist like "rocky" hitin u leavin bodly obstruction//1
acceptin this battle was a harmfull way ta rep tha productions//2
AND
the only way ur catchin a win in this battle is dick ride votes n thats jus the beging , need i say more//4(in his sig)
like a anarexic gril playin vollyball the only time ur involved wid tha game is when ur keepin tha score//5" . . . those lines were pretty tight, but some of your other punches were just too weak, like . . .

"battle call,u hear my name nervs in ur iner-organs consend n im leavin verses out,that catch ur body-throbin//12
swingin fist,connect n shatter ribs,ull be thinkin im the "gilutine" the way im chopin heads like laranea-bobins//13" . . . personals were even, but Bribe took this one with the better flow and more punches.

VOTE=BRIBEONE1 (i'll be back later to poll vote - I'm signed on wit' shitty-ass AOL) 1