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Old 06-05-03, 02:02 PM   #13
Kid the Apostle
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Vote - Shadow God

1ngone...ya opener was nice..the rest was good..but ya had some played concepts...flow was off a bit...not enuff creativity...

lines felt are...
u could spit double my lines and ya weak style would still drag-on/
tha shadow falls like im billy lee leavin u hurricane-spun//
get soned, like i switched hits to ur backside, made light ur dark-hide//
its like apartheid, cuz ur dark ass and I are NOT TIED!!//


Shadow...ya came wit nice creativity and nice punchez overall...there was some forced multi's but the rest were nice...felt you came harder than 1nGone...

lines felt are...
You SMACK~THE~PAVEMENT, I'm a killa homophobic nerd cuz i'll 'HACK~THIS~GAY~KID~!..
*Fag* couldn't get 'air time on NICK~AT~NITE', not even the 'intro song' for 'DICKS~AND~DYKES'.. (Dick Van Dyke)
I'll destroy ya corpse cuz I'm KEEN~TO~SCRIMMAGE and nigs lookin for you on billboards sayin have you SEEN~THIS~IMAGE!..
Punch his corpse 'till his SPLEENS~A~BLEMISH, i'll delete microsoft paint and leave 'SCENE'~DIMINSHED~!'..
and ya first two...
-DESTROY~YOUR~ANATOMY~AND~GET~YA~MORPHIN, EMPLOY~A~CATASTROPHE~AND~LEFT~YA~AN~ORPHAN..
-DEPLOYED~MY~MASTERY~AND~SEVERED~YOUR~ORGANS, ENJOYED~THE~FLATTERY~BUT~NOW~YOUR~CLEFT~LIKE~GORGO
N..



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