Whooooo-weeee haha, this battle was tight, to the kid who said it wasn't.. well, it was. heh. Alright I'm gunna give the break down of what I thought..
*clears throat*
Ronin came hard, I mean if this shit was audio I woulda loved it, cause everytime I read battles I always think that I am reading them wrong, but Ronin had some decent wordplay, his rhymes were multis but it still seemed simple at times, but so did feeble mind, I think feeble took this with lines like:
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i dont have to type big to be noticed...bitches feel it just cuz i wrote it/
your flows the re-motest, quote this, you still aint hit puberty, voice only changed from 'deep' throatin/
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and
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only way ya blows are vigorous is if you take my hand and use it/
my flow is rigorous, triggering blows, use this keyboard, i bash and abuse it/
you rest in the casket, i resurrect ya body to re-blast it/
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^I just liked how that sounded, it had a really great flow. it was dope.
Ronnin came really nice though, not someone I would battle anytime soon, but I mean, it's not liek this was a blow out, good job.
Peace