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Old 06-05-03, 08:38 PM   #4
Tsar Casm
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"o lord" that all i have to say son
word of advice:elevate

your problem lies in the fact that you go off subject an its short for instance
"and you and your boys will be toast/
every where you go east or west coast/
and i know you will try to go and boast/
now i am schoring you with the mic and listeningto roast/
so don't come back to rb and never ever post/"

it didnt flow

you need the elevation praclomation
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