view of the same review .........i liked it how u rhymed words inbetween a sentence

that was ill.....nice topic.........
The was coming to end, seven days long so many sent to heaven |
There was this young one by the name of Evan, picked up an AK 47 ////////wordplay was good.......i never realized evan and 7 rhymed lol..........


good work............the chorus is alrite..........