nyce piece, young one, good story, good flow, aight rhyme scheme, aight diction, really good for a newbie, keep writin.....with a couple of changes you could blow this biatch up, stay real,

oh yeah, next tyme you reply mines, drop more than 7 words, lol, peace, 1

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