It’s not Fair-Ya-See, I have no family……I Rarely-Eat/,
How can people have so much……and you Rarely-See them Share-With-Me/
I’ve neva been to skool……I can barely read, on top of that….i can Barely-See/,
Tha smog is thick here……I Rarely-Breath Air-that’s-Clean/
Ever since I was 5 and I saw my Parents-Leave/
I realized that I must have been a MISTAKE…….no one has been there to Care-For-Me”/ ...........yo the wordplay n multies is sick...
nice job with that.............................................

yo the topic was ill, the concept was nice..its nice how u played 3 roles.....u thinkin to yoself, u talkin to the kid, the kid talkin to u.....
nicely dun......this is a really good piece............................

UPPING for this kid...................this piece doesnt need ta get slept on