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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Ohhh k, Pats verse was oh k, it flowed well but there were no real punches at all...Most of it you were just talking yourself up and not focusing on punching oin Treach...Treaches verse was not bad...I think he took this by just coming harder with punches but try not to feed off others verse, that was the only flaw I could see in it...This line was nice though....
If 'Youre battlin till youre last breath than you sure have had a short 'carreer',/
^^That was Pretty Nice^^
Both of you keep at it and elevate.....
Vote=Treach
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