Thread: Next Up J-cyph
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Old 06-07-03, 03:19 PM   #2
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aiight this the first one to check...
nice diss, feeling the flownice rhymesetc.

'immitation is a disease-you infected with ease-
so when you say you ill you doing to a reflection of me-
so dont diss me battlen come's at a price... you end up broke-
nobody's laughen at your raps cause they funny it's cause your the joke-
a weak comedy relief- abreviate you to J.C.- which means the kid admits to trying to clone Jay-Z-'

this ending was very nice, the rest was o'kay but this was strong.
by the way...f'real...how long did it take you to complete this verse?
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