i'm not the one to really read this type of rhyme i thought it was an ok flow ith some godd wordplays but it lacked punches in my opinion but your new and will get better

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun