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Yo Opinion 'bout My stupid rap.
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06-08-03, 06:12 PM
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LunkHead
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needs work. you at least stayed on the same subject but you should try gettin more in depth with it. use a different rhyme scheme and try uppin the vocab. use some multis. just keep practicin.........
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