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Originally posted by metaphysical one
alright, Bribe's verse was pretty tight, except for those first two lines. THOG, your verse was alright but it was too sporadic and the flow was a little off . ..
"THOG swingin fist like "rocky" hitin u leavin bodly obstruction//1
acceptin this battle was a harmfull way ta rep tha productions//2
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the only way ur catchin a win in this battle is dick ride votes n thats jus the beging , need i say more//4(in his sig)
like a anarexic gril playin vollyball the only time ur involved wid tha game is when ur keepin tha score//5" . . . those lines were pretty tight, but some of your other punches were just too weak, like . . .
"battle call,u hear my name nervs in ur iner-organs consend n im leavin verses out,that catch ur body-throbin//12
swingin fist,connect n shatter ribs,ull be thinkin im the "gilutine" the way im chopin heads like laranea-bobins//13" . . . personals were even, but Bribe took this one with the better flow and more punches.
VOTE=BRIBEONE1 (i'll be back later to poll vote - I'm signed on wit' shitty-ass AOL) 1
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