^^^^^

with longer lines like that I know the audio would sound better

but for people reading it without a beat or anything it comes off as the flow not being quite there...

more multi's would help ease this..........

in some bars it comes off like this:

blah blah blah blah blah blah rhyme
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah ryhme

would flow better with
blah blah blah ryhme blah blah ryhme
blah blah ryhme blah blah blah ryhme

ya know...

verses are still hot, it'd just give it a little more effect ya know