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IP:
Ay yo let me really break down his verse for you hate voters who dont dont know anything bout battle rapping
You come with shit as popular as the “slave trade”, this “lightweight” trips out after drinking a glass of Kool Aid// 1
*Not a punch, i am a veteran so that personal was a lie*
Been in Junior High for over a decade, I had to blow up your fucking school to get you out of 3rd grade// 2
*alright concept, not anything spectacular*
I heard your shit and wished I would go deaf, shouldn’t have bothered with this has-been and saved my breath// 3
*Makes no sense because this is a text battle and you can't hear text*
I could prolly lock this dumbass in a grocery store and he would still starve to DEATH// 4
*you can't be serious, that is a joke that i read on dirtyjokes.com*
I’ll lyrically attack you when you’re unaware, causing more humiliation than the Clinton-lewinsky affair// 5
*Nice line, nice execution*
You were hurt-now you’re in despair, leave you so damaged you aren’t even in a “state of repair”// 6
*ummm that rhymed but not a punch or real diss*
When you look at his face beware, this ugly fuck can give the “Elephant Man” nightmares// 7
*i dont even wanna comment on that...It sucked!!!!!!*
Take notice of the knowledge I impart, I’ll “bypass” your rhymes cause you have a “weak heart”// 8
*PLAYED OUT CONCEPT*
Fake trying to look smart, I peeped your rhyme book and complained the covers were too far apart// 9
*hahaha...wow that sucked almost as much as line 7*
Shitty wordplays and metaphors I can do without, after this battle I garuntee you’ll just fizzle out// 10
*without and fizzle out...man you got flow (lol)*
Its better to keep quiet and look like an idiot, than to speak and remove all doubt// 11
*nice line, poor execution*
My verse
I will add you too my win list with all my enemies. Merk your whole crew so now you got "Defeatable Tendencies"
*Personal with nice execution*
This dude must be like 12 because he thinks rap is about "gunz and shit" he has 7 wins and 1 loss cause i just merked this bitch
*Metaphor and personal*
I can't believe yall got me battling a dude with Dragon Ball Z avy, this dude location is unknown so he must be from the red part of Cincinnati
*Personal, poorly executed*
Dog face the fact that your game is a tragedy, you have no personals in your punches, so when you spit them I can’t tell if you battling me
*Personal......DAMN!!!!!!*
Im gonna beat you like a drunk daddy would do, you spit like “cheap strippers”, so there is no “Poor-puss”(purpose) in my battling you
*Punch*
They call you “wet dick” cause on the mic you are keeping it moist, they only call you in “ill M.C”(emcee) cause you are “Sick with Multiple Choice”
Punch*
Overall brick took it with punches and personals!!!!!!!!!!!, Marcianno's verse lacked personals, wordplay, and punches were played out and weak...that is a real break down....Not none of that shit that ...Red... is talkin
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