Aight I'm Back and Checkin in. here's my verse:

Now I know dis is pretty mean pickin on a newbie/
But he's da one who called out, accepted my request, and pmed me jus like a typical rookie/
So imma have ta straight this dawg out and put em in his place wit da rest of the pathetic new incoming emcee's/
That was a nice poem dawg, but remember were emcee battlin/
Were not exchangin luv letters, and plus I'm straight yo, not a faggot/
Boy, no way in hell u got game to get a girl, she jus need ta take 1 look atchya and she starts laughin/
The only game, and fun u got is playin wit urself under yo bed sheets and blanket/
Ur jus like every other newbie i battled, some nice rhymes but no hard punches/
U beatin me is like the Nets tryin to beat da Lakers last year in da ship (championship), it's hopeless/
Aftah dis battle, u mine as well retire cuz I'm leavin ya jawless/
So be cautious, cuz u gettin me obnoxious, and my skills are startin 2 get flawless/
I'm chargin hard straight at ya like a credit card chargin towards merchandise in da market/
G~Code losin ta 808...50 bucks,G~Code bein my bitch...$125 and 50 cents/
G~Code gettin shut down while talkin shit and have it all back-fired...priceless/
Now it's time fo me ta deminish u, make u cross-dress, hit u right in the chest, drippin each punch on u so hard u wouldn't know it hit ya like water drippin 4um the faucet/
Droppin multiple punches on yo head, yo hair will look colorful, makin u confess dat now u look uglier than Dennis Rodman wit more femness/(femanime=faggot)
I admit, dat was an aight rhyme, fo a dawg dat's new to dis/
NOT! Jus kiddin, dat was jus like every other newbie's first battle, worth nothin but shit/
Now shorty, right before I end dis verse and see the score between us wit MC 808: 5 poll votes, and G~Codes votes: None/
Let me give u a code dat u can understand: 0-1~0-1~0-1~0-1~0-1/